kaydeascream
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Judgement through force!
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Post by kaydeascream on Dec 18, 2008 17:29:12 GMT -5
I feel I am amputated from my happiness, not knowing how the hell I can deal with this. Internally, I am cold. This fucking depression has its lasting hold on me. Each Scar, each burn is murder to my soul. But each injury, has no pain on me. All the anger, hurt inside, oozes out like poison from my mind.
I just can't take it anymore. I can't put up with this fucking internal war. All the anger, hurt inside. Versus my death, my suicide!
I feel I am amputated from my happiness, not knowing how the hell I can deal with this. Internally, I am cold. This fucking depression has its lasting hold on me. Each Scar, each burn is murder to my soul. But each injury, has no pain on me. All the anger, hurt inside, oozes out like poison from my mind.
If I was gone, how would you cope? You wouldn't care? FUCK YOU! I don't care what you think anymore. A piece of shit, a corpse in my way. FUCK YOU, I'll do it anyways.
I feel I am amputated from my happiness, not knowing how the hell I can deal with this. Internally, I am cold. This fucking depression has its lasting hold on me. Each Scar, each burn is murder to my soul. But each injury, has no pain on me. All the anger, hurt inside, oozes out like poison from my mind. From my mind... From my FUCKIN mind.
-Kaydea Lautzenheiser
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Post by 6dave49 on Dec 20, 2008 22:41:08 GMT -5
good song, like how you ended it to
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kaydeascream
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Post by kaydeascream on Dec 20, 2008 22:44:45 GMT -5
Thanks Dave, <3
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Post by stupinator on Dec 20, 2008 22:50:28 GMT -5
seems like you repeated the chorus too much.
where's the intro?
add the intro and more verses and you get 5 golden stars \o/
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Post by 6dave49 on Jan 14, 2009 17:25:41 GMT -5
umm,, she set it up good the corase is the intro, and she deosnt repet it to much, i dont think, with music added it sould be killer song
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